I agree with somewhat with pomoli. This would definitely have worked somewhat better as a dumb ecchi manga. Because even for a web novel, and the expected lower standard compared to normal LN (not to mention proper novels) they usually have, this one is has to be one of the worst out there. It feels like it's written by a 15 year old for a school project or something, and not by a talented one.
Sure, the idea ain't that bad really, but the execution... Oh boy, now that beyond terrible. One could argue that it's stuck at
the dumb comedy level, but I'm not laughing. It's not entertaining and the story is pretty much like every other novel out there in this genre. The MC is a perverted moron, and no, it's pretty damn far from being funny, instead it feels creepy. More or less, it's a story about a 16 year old, having op powers to solve every single problem, the same old in cliches in this wish fulfillment genre in other words. The main difference here, is that the MC sexually harass pretty much every female he comes across. If that's your cup of tea, you probably could find some minuscule entertainment from this web novel, but there are far better stuff our there in that genre if you are into that. Hell, just read a hentai or a porn novel instead.
The worst part is probably the translation (the horrible flow of the story and words doesn't exactly help either). And it's not solely a problem with this particular one, a lot of amateur translators fails at this. Sure, they do it for free, so that we can read stuff couldn't do otherwise. Don't get me wrong, I'm truly grateful for all the great anime and mangas I've read over they years which I could't do otherwise. But I'm not Japanese and I DO NOT want to have to read every 5 to 10 words in Japanese. And please, please try to keep the Japanese honorifics to a minimum, it's extremely frustrating, even if I do know what the words mean individually.
One of my favorite authors is Haruki Murakami, and if I had to read lines like in the spoiler below, (taken from the chapter 8) I would have thrown the books away in pure disgust after 1 chapter, instead of loving them.
"…………So it was nothing but a pipe dream. Sherry-san’s husband is a brawny muscular macho after all. He was the “I won’t let you wait long” type of husband. Gusun (sob).
「Wait, you mean, me?」
Remembering Sherry-san’s words, I get confused.
「Yes. ……It looks like Lili-chan has taken a liking to Yuuya-kun after all. ……And most of all, it’s because I’d feel relieved if she’s with Yuuya-kun.」"
(-17)
