The story is a twist of the "people selected to save the world from demons/monsters that invade earth" setting, it's a bit better than most sine there is some more depth to it thou this is not apparent at first, still it's not a particularly interesting setting or interesting story, especially because of it's execution.
It's basically ruined by commentators and messages from random people, especially the latter. Basically 10000 people get teleported to a buffer area where they have to fight demons/beasts to prevent the merger of two worlds/realities and therefore the annihilation(?) of the human race. All which is transmitted live to every human cellphone, let's say half of earth population has one? 4 billion? Then, this people can comment and donate "fate", here is were the crap starts. There should be a non-ending stream of comments yet in a battle for the survival of the human race, the author only decides to show comments written by 10 year old brats the make fun, jive, insult the participants, etc. all this while those trying to save earth die like flies. Likewise, there should be an endless stream of donations from those billions and it stands to reason that every single participant would receive some amount since we all have different appeals and standards, I for example would be prone to strengthening the weak ones (at first at least), others may chose the strong, the pretty, the funny, the brave, young, moral, amoral, etc. all should be receiving thousands if not hundred of thousands of fate points, even, if it's like in old china were "the heavens" or "the world" refers only to china, it's still over a billion people, with 10000 players all should receive a good chunk, plus, thee spectators get points (plural) each day, most likely in the double digits, not clear.
Above all the level of the comments and their pointless irrelevance to the story made was the first clear sing that this is a manhua, as always, too much weight in random no-ones' opinions, and they take too much "time" in the story, about 1/2 of the panels are wasted in this pointless chatter when the live action is ongoing.
The only good point so far is the calm and collented MC, he's a bit too upright at times but otherwise interesting.
The rest, the art is good for manhua, the pace is ok and the dialogues are base and lame.
Overall, it's a mediocre manhua, thou ok for those with too much free time on their hands.