Pacing isn't great, the MC's personality has no remarkable traits at all, he's worse than Skyrim bandits. The side characters are also very bland and flat, mostly one dimensional following whatever trope the author wants.
The power scaling is absolute dog:
MC can somehow kill 20 goblins on his second day, then a little later takes on 20 whole orcs by himself. S-rank guy who shows up is supposedly leagues above the MC, but he barely does anything to display the power difference.
No stakes at all, MC never struggles during his fights. Dropped it at chapter 15, but all he has done is one shot monsters and get randomly overgeared. It's just OP MC being done wrong.
Art isn't bad and has good angles and perspective, but the amount of 3D usage is too much imo. All the backgrounds are prerendered and very jarring since they don't blend with the art style and hand-drawn characters at all, plus their quality isn't great, they look like PS3 models.
Don't want to throw shade at manhua authors, but this feels like the average manhua slop you either read for 10 chapters, or finish it all mindlessly and forget about the entire thing after one day.
The premise is actually pretty cool, shame that it's written terribly.