It is coherent, idk why people say it isnt. The main issue people will have is remebering the characters and their respective names. Cause i have that issue
Main issue i had with first 100-150 chapters is that it feels like pai goes missing just to he saved by mc, but it does get better as the manga continues
My favorite thing about the manga are the twists, like the twist at end of vol 2 i think, and the twist on ch 54-55. Its really good at changing expectation and the story is like a 7-8 its pretty good
FUCK THE MERCHANT DUDE, HE LITERALLY FED MC A POISON PILL DURING HIS FIGHT IN CHAPTER 220 ISH, ALL BECAUSE HE WANTED THE SNAKE GIRL TO LIVE, WHICH SHE WOULD BE ABLE TO REGARDLESS AS SHE WOLE UP AND BROKE HER CHAINS, I HOPE SHE DOES NOT DATE THE MERCHANT, MERCHANT DID NOT HAVE ALOT OF SCREEN TIME FOR THE CLPAST COUPLE OF VOLUMES, SO I HOPE THEY JUST MAKE THEM A COUPLE CAUSE THAT WOULD BE STUPID
After chapter 150, u can predict things, so yhere arent really any twists
Chapter 230, it seems the writings is hurtlying in a downward spiral, its becoming too generic. "Ah u thought u killed me, but actually that was not me, im here and at full power, even though what u were fighting just now was very difficult "
Chapter 280 its starts getting great again, like jesus wow its better than the first 100 chapt or so
I think i figured out why certain parts of the manga becomes just horrendous while other parts are literally the best things ive read in this manga so far.
Whenever berrus or the shiva wu guy is involved, the whole story/plot goes just downhill, as everything that built up to that moment has been just thrown out the window in order to show that this dude means business and will fuck up anyone
Finished it
My thoughts overall good manga, only had some issues with it.
First issue was in most portions if the manga,, pai is missing and mc must look and find her, this happens alot and get really annoying
Second issue, the final fight was an extreme let down
like 2 chapters were all that were used to show how the bad guys lost.
The manga writing was great, but whenever berrus or whatever the hell his name was involved, i found myself skimming the chapters, as it was very predictable what would happen, such as mc fights berrus, berrus kicks his ass, mc then is able to fight against berrus, berrus then shows signs of struggle, only after when mc thinks he is defeated, does berrus say some bullshit like "that was not even me, that was something i made using like 1 % of my power, now you get to face the real deal" cue to mc getting beaten the shit out of.
The main issue i had was that arcs were very extended, an arc that could have been completed in at least a chapter would be extended to sevwral chapters, this extension plus berrus made my experience with the manga horrendous. Because of this, from chapters 400 till the end, i found myself skimming, because of this and other factors which will go into spoilers.
What i disliked
i hated, absolutely hate the evil pai bits, i just could not reallly get into the manga during those bits, i also hated the end, so baiscally mc is dead or gone and pai needs to find him, i get that this could be like her turn to make him remembereverything as he once did in the beggining when he spent 4 years looking for her, but still
A major plus is there is
confimration of sex in chapters 538 and 545, but they dont actually show sex, but its insisted
The ending felt like more could be desired, but some people may actually like the ending this had, personally i didnt really
I hope the sequel does get translated, as i feel that the sequel wikk make me satisfied with everything