Faints
If I rated this in the p0rn catagory, I'd give it a 10+. If I was to rate it as a moving story, it'd be much lower.
That was hot: blistering, boiling, broiling, burning, fiery, heated, red-hot, roasting, scalding, scorching, searing, sizzling, sultry, sweltering, torrid. Yah. H-O-T.
But. The story was lacking a bit. It could have been developed better so that I could form an emotional connection beyond it's p0rn-ish nature. I would have liked to have been drawn in more by the relationship that could have powerfully developed between the husband and the servant. They were just sorta 'flat' when I felt they had the possiblity to be so full of many dimensions. For example, I didn't feel anything when the servant boy said he has always loved his master.
But still worth the quick read!