The only thing as far as I can see that saves this series is the art. (And by the way, I question the genre "comedy." It's not comedic at all––– try overdramatic instead.)
The character development is non-existent, and both the main characters are immature. To top it off, the smut totally sucks. Which is why I don't even understand shoujo smut––it completely lacks the smut factor. That said, there are, as a previous reviewer has said, good shoujo smut and bad shoujo smut, though I've only seen one or two of the former but hundreds of the latter.
But for a more substantial review, I'll try to be more objective. The balance in this piece is surprisingly good. Because both of the main characters are idiots, the girl does not seem as idiotic as the stereotypical shoujo heroine. The main guy character, on the other hand, fails to hold up the "perfect guy" shoujo standard, but I don't feel that detracts from the story. If there is a story.
Frankly, the only reason why this thing progressed from a oneshot (when it shouldn't have) is because of the art. Right now, it's easy to see that either the manga-ka has no originality (except for the art perhaps), or she's adding in random shoujo plot shticks as she goes along. Even the jokes are overused, and aren't that funny.
So... yeah. I would skip this one, even if you're a hard-core shoujo fan. I wouldn't mind it if were only one volume, but any more than that is ridiculous. It's not even bad enough for it to be funny, only irritating.