I started this one a long time ago and just ended it in an axed ending, so my review is a bit fuzzy on the details. I think the start (first 40-50ch) was rather better than the rest but I can't be sure.
Story, it's a cliche one, transmigration, system, etc. the thing here is that it's not a straight cultivation story, it's similar, and in more than one sense, to "All hail the sect leader" were the MC is tasked by the system to build a holy site (sect in the other and for all purposes it's similar here), the system rewards him not for cultivation or fighting but for misc things, mainly money but also, collecting plants, times a skill is used, to business, disciples gathered, etc.. As he does this stuff he grows stronger. The strong part in this story is the comedy, that again, it's similar to that of "All hail the sect leader", so if you like that one you'll probably like this one. I found it funny at times, a miss at others.
As for the characters, the MC is a good fellow but not overly so, there is (as said) a lot of comedy mixed so expect a lot of BS that somehow doesn't feel completely out of place, so for me, it didn't disrupt the reading. There is also a big cast of secondary chars, all fairly important, some are interesting, some are there for the puns (mostly) and so on. Unfortunately, the FL is very annoying and her arc is the longest, about 45-50chs are about her and that part was a tedium to read.
Art is decent, thou it fits well with the comedic intentions of the story, so good. Pace is rather uneven, at times it's packed with events and at times it's mostly "slice-of-life" comedy. Dialogues... hard to say since translation is rather bad, but it's decent.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read, nothing special for sure and it's spoiled by the artist axing the story before the MC could even finish the main quest of making the holy land, so if one wants to know more the novel is the only option and it's not translated (as far I know), and I at least, don't care enough about the story to read it.